| "Forbidden Love" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Kyuuni_The _Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha i loved it it's so funny i like it when kakshi is like wat a cute lil' dolphin i craked up or when naruto was acting like a child
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Reviewed By: kai28(to lazy to log in) On: September 24, 2006 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you made my friend scream. im deaf in one ear.... keep up the good work?
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Reviewed By: Moon_Goddess_Insueka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG come on it was getting to nthe good part too!!! lol well it was great can't wait for the next chappie lol, so hurry up and update.....pretty please :D. lol. love this story great job!
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 07:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay!!!! this chapter was so cool. what's going to happen next???? I want to know!!!!
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Reviewed By: koende On: September 12, 2006 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha how amusing you must keep up the good work. Also ill be watiing for your update.
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 10:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
i luv dis fis sooo effin much. i really wanna know watz gonna happen next. update soon.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 16:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please Keep Writting. I'm Really Getting into this Story. ??What's going to happen??
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Reviewed By: Moon_Goddess_Insueka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 08:29 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it!!! please please update real soon!!! great job by the way. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Moon_Goddess_Insueka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this fanfic i hope it has a happy ending and kill the bitch sakura already lmao i realyl don't fancy her if u can't tell lmao but great job with the story can't wait to read the next chapter and hoping that naruto and sasuke has some more forbidden encounters lol. love it update!!!
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Reviewed By: kakashifangirl_13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2006 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, you need to write more! I love it so far, what's going to happen next? It's really good! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Cancers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 06:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great intro, at least not everyone could stand Sakura's bubbles of hot air; hope you keep on writing.
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Reviewed By: Raigushiki On: July 17, 2006 03:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>.< Cliffhanger >.< You are Ebil! Update ASAP... please? I love this; keep doing what you do best; Sasunaru cliffhangers :P Just joking... SasukexNaruto Yaoi ^.^ well uhh from what I tell, great style of writing, Great spelling and grammer, and wonderful descriptions, and plot addons. And there is absolutly no wrongly placed OOC so far, the only OOC bieng Sakura not Tackling Sasuke*falls over laughing* Well, update soon, pwese? lol ja ne
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