| "Everything Changes" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so ic and yet still lovely to read
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Reviewed By: ss4shirow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg!!!Future Trunks trying to make Vegeta undersrand how indenial he is....perfect....oh and I kinda snickered about it too....well, maybe not snicker... Anyway, good sense of writing if only Trunks did that in the series then I'd laugh my ass off from the sight!!
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Title: terrific read
Reviewed By: Trynia Merin On: July 16, 2006 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent job. I especially liked Mirae Trunks knocking sense into Vegeta. That was a perfect touch. Nothing like his own son showing him the error of his ways and that he can't just walk away from the people who love him. This is definately one of the good ones I'll read time and again. Thank you.
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