| "Welcome to the wonderful world of puberty" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: KetsuekiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2009 16:25 CDT
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wow....i've read this chapter about 20 times, and I just now noticed that you put "content" rathe that "consent" in the last bit of dialog! Hahahahaha
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Reviewed By: Mad-Hatter [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2008 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want you to know that this was my vary first yaoi and this was/is the hole reason i have become something next to obsessed with yaoi I love this fanfic!! its one of the best Sorra/Riku iv ever read and trust me iv read a lot but still non are better then this! I'm almost sad that this was my first because now all my expectations are two high for most to even think about..... ~Mad-Hatter PS I also felt bad that i havent review/commented on this fanfic yet XP sorry
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Reviewed By: Innus On: February 19, 2007 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Impressive...and I'm not easy to impress. Keep it up! ;]
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: plusher [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 11:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read all your fanfictions on mediaminer, and all i can say is wow...they are so fucking tasty! I just love yaoi, i may try writing one myself.
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Reviewed By: RealEmotion [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just want to let u know i just began writing my fanfic and hopefuly u will read it sometime. it is going to be great. But i have been reading fan-fics for three years now. Just to let you know i have read ur fan-fic 12 times throughout those years. i think ur fanfic is marvelouse and the messege behind it is incredible. keep up the awsome work and the sequal it good too. but i love the originals of everything. awsome job. hope u stop by mine. leave a review. i am still workin on the story . ;)
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Reviewed By: whitebear33 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a great job. You also must have poeticness in you. You write very well.
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Reviewed By: bahhh On: September 17, 2006 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is soo good.. and now its so sad... :( poor sora... please update soon!
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Reviewed By: bootheel_boy09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 20:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG How sad, I'm almost crying, but that's also cause I'm really pissed off right now. I can't believe Sora, how could he (you make him) question his love and everything for Riku? Please hurry with the next chapter. Oh and a question for you, what kind of car was it. (I like cars, fast cars... lol) +_+ bootheel_boy09 +_+
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Reviewed By: bootheel_boy09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry with the next chapter!!!! +_+ bootheeel_boy09 +_+
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Reviewed By: bootheel_boy09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2006 23:19 CDT
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Wow, didn't expect a cliffe!! LOL, but good, keep it up! My friends are makeing fun of me cause I'm reading a Yaoi and I'm a straight guy, but oh well its kinda funny, kewl, something, well keep it up.. thanks for the story!!!
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Reviewed By: hidoichibiahou2 On: September 02, 2006 00:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
god this is so cute! :D I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!
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Title: ATTENTION
Reviewed By: Zeldafan101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 00:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was written AGES ago!!!!!! THERE'S EVEN A SEQUEAL here's the link for Puberty http://games.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544184081 AND.....The Sequeal "Aches of the Heart" http://games.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=544198580 sorry BDP but I had to tell Zeldafan101
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Reviewed By: Silver Talons [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 20:57 CDT
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I love it but I can help but be curious about what it would be like if riku and sora's positions were switched in bed i think it would be interesting to see a seme sora for at least one time
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Reviewed By: Fanficr3ader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2006 16:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS THE BEST THAT I HAVE EVER READ!!!I LOVE IT, IT IS A MASTERPIECE... :D
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Reviewed By: hidoichibiahou2 On: August 21, 2006 04:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh this is purtty.. i love it. your lemons are excellent!!! .. cant see kairi like that though holy crap. it was intersting though. :) keep it goin!
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