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| "Depths of memory" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: Read it on AFF.net
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 15:43 CST
Comment/Review:
All I can say is that I too love your KH fiction with SoraxRiku. I already reviewed this fic on AFF.net but I wanted to let you know that I hope you continue writing more new fiction and I'm glad you decided to post this fic here on MM.org. I look forward to reading your next story.
| Title: Again wow
Reviewed By: Yaoidreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again all i can say is wow and how much i love your stories. I love the way they bring up this emotions from inside my own heart, and how i yearn for Sora and Riku to always be happy and love each other. You are a skilled writer, a talent that many people have and cant or wont use. You may never read this but i wish you luck in everything you dop, and i hopee you will never lose your passion for writing.. i alsoi want you to now that i'm grateful, i have been going through shit latly, and this story as risen my spirt and gave me courage to live onn anndd nott killl myself.. im,, i''m shakiign too much soo io got to ennd this, thank yoy.
| Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 20:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really nicely written, I just wish there was more! ^^ The story idea is certainly unique considering they are like reincarnations of their past selves and similar in appearance to their past selves. I wonder if Sora has been having the same dreams as Riku... The plot is very interesting so far and we still don't knwo exactly how they died in the past. Riku's certainly taking more interest in Sora and now it's clicked that he's the man in his dreams. ;) With some spelling and grammar errors here in there it was still easy to read and could still be improved upon. I truly hope you continue this story so we can find out what happens next! Keep up the good work!!
| Reviewed By: Finalsoragil19 On: September 06, 2006 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story and i love welcome to the wondurful world of puperty so update soon
| Reviewed By: ranjn On: August 09, 2006 01:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. I think the overall storyline is very original and creative, I love that Riku is a straight man working for a gay magazine. Very funny. I also love Kairi's and Sora's characters, Kairi being the great and caring friend who loves one of the protagonists, and Sora is usually so innocent, it's refreshing to have a change of pace. I spotted some grammer and spelling errors. This is your second profile right? And on your other one, it metioned that english isn't your first language, so we can't hold that agains you, can we? All in all this is a wonderful fic, and I am also a fan of your other works as well. I look forward to your updates
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