| "It Wasn't Always So" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Honey Sue [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 00:12 CST
Comment/Review:
please continue it ...i love it!
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Reviewed By: Pandora Marwell On: February 26, 2004 08:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was really good- I really liked it. There is a true insight there into both characters, I could imagine it quite easily. PLEASE write another chapter, I look forward to reading the next bit.
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Reviewed By: Ran-chan On: May 04, 2002 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes!in answer to your question, you should definitly add more.It's great.The dialogues are clever and very in-character.
It's obvious that there was some sort of unspoken bond between Battousai and Saitoh.A sort of mutual respect, you know?And I like what you've written.Update soon. |
