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| "Love Reborn" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: KimenoLytra [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 02:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, your fan fic was very creative. But, your mispelled Goh, in chapter two. I really liked how you made it seem as if all three girls are going to be the new Pretear. That would be cool if all three of them were ^^; I feel bad that Mawata had to become your Princess of Despair though. She was one of my favorite characters in the show. I hope that you write your third chapter soon. But I do understand having writers block, I've had some for a month and I'm writing a novel for school ^^;
| Title: Continue!
Reviewed By: Kise On: August 11, 2006 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally fell in love with the story, please continue soon!
| Title: Great!^^
Reviewed By: Kanade On: August 03, 2006 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, your story sounds really great and im really looking forward to the next chapter! Hihi always wanted to know what will happen next with Hayate and all... Is Rain maybe playing a role in life, like she always pretends to be the happy person, but actualy is more like her manga character Mai? Please write soon, and goodluck with your block :S Bye! Kanade
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