| "A Dangerous Bounty" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: SSJ3GOKU On: July 15, 2002 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN.....WHY DO YOU TAKE TOO LONG TO UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE MORE QUICKLY. I LIKE FIC |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 20:39 CDT
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Of course..10 out of 10..on everything..jeez.. hehe..anywho..not only are you a great artist..you are a great author! buratu!! i hope you have this next chapter ready to set up cuz i'm getting older by the minute!! i aint gonna live forever!! ^^;; hehe..now..will you update soon? or will i have to persuade Baruh to make you?? hehe iberu ne? ja ne!
°¤ Vegeta's Love aka..Sutefanii ¤° |
Reviewed By: SilverSun101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eyes tear up* it was for me? REALLY? AWW!! ^.^Thanks! I know, how 'bout her dad had been in some kindof alliance with Frieza or something making top secret plans for him and inventions in order to uhm-- protect earth. And no one knew exactly who it was but the name 'brief' was attached say "Brief's top secret famous-whatever-it-is invention" And uh-- after he was killed, people found out about his heir, Bulma, but of course weren't sure how old she was, whether she was male or female, but knew he had a kid-- whatever. Hey! What if Bulma had a bounty on her head as well! You know, being a famous inventor's daughter and all. Like the whole reason the rest of her family was killed is because of frieza, Frieza's motive would be--because dr.Breif was too smart for his own good-- and he posed a threat?? I'm just shooting in the dark here ^_^' Is it just me or does that plot sound familiar? Oh well. ^_~ Anyways, keep it up! I really like this ficcy, so original, so well written ^_^
Oh! And I have the next pages of my doujinshii up, come and see! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: SilverSun101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! Where is chapter six? Get off your lazy butt and give me chapter 6! Now! damn you. lol I'm just kidding, though it would be really nice if you could get that next chapter out, like, you know-- soon? Please? Pretty please? ^_^ |
Reviewed By: SilverSun101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 14:05 CDT
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Yay! I can't wait till V n' B meet! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: SilverSun101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I'm just surprised that I haven't read it sooner. That was funny-- the part about her usual drink being a glass of Brandy, hehe. I'm of to chapter 3 ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I would write more but I'm being forced off the internet so keep up the good work.-JB |
Reviewed By: catgurl11 On: June 29, 2002 18:19 CDT
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Let's go with the chapters girl!!!!! I'm luv'n this story!!!! More, More, More!!!!! |
Reviewed By: dbz28 On: June 29, 2002 18:18 CDT
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You should have Bulma capture Vegeta........it would make an interesting plot.....all of your chapters are too short!!!! but I like it a lot and hope more people review so that you will post more. |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's cool your putting your fic up at this site too. I guess maybe it's a good thing that FF.net is screwed up so a lot of new authors are coming here. K anyways I love this story and I loved it to begin with so umm... yeah. K anyways I'll be waiting for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 08:49 CDT
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Luv the fic. But you have to hurry with the new chapters! ^_^
~*~Dipity~*~ |
Reviewed By: Masume On: May 03, 2002 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, this is good too! You just HAVE to finish these stories! They're great! This one is so cute. Bulma the bounty hunter. I love it! Update soon!(please!) |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 13:35 CDT
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You already know I give you a ten on all things! Come on Buranudii (thats your name in Japanese Translation, mines boring ol' Sutefanii) be an even greater fanfic author and gimme all of the other chapters!! I'm dying (literally) to find out what is gonna happen! ::pouts and runs crying to her vegeta plushie:: meanie!! XP hehe..nah..i'll be a patient person for yaz! yo have to come around sometime! muahaha! anywho..i love what you got going on here..the plot is fantastic..i laways read the same plot line for bv..yours is like a breath of fresh air! thank you! but then again..i love all your works! art and all! ^^ just incase you haven't noticed..i'm a total fan of yours! 100%! lol..anywho..if you want..you can email me at vegetaslove@hotmail.com if you need anything, help, advice i don't care if you email me just to say hi! well i g˛g K? love yaz buh bye~
Much love,
°¤Steph a.k.a. Vegeta's Love¤° |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2002 08:10 CDT
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oooo! i like this idea a lot! Post up more! How about Mogami as a name for the sayian friend? |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2002 06:33 CDT
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evil evil evil i say you are evil you stoped. yuo MUST put up more...plz.
great fic and deffinatly original,
:)mizu:P |
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