| "There and back again" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: stom On: April 21, 2007 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Learn to use a spell check please. Your spelling brings down the entire story down and makes it incredibly hard to read, to the point where I couldn't really enjoy what might have other wise been a good story.
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Title: I can't belive that Seigaku lost!!!
Reviewed By: DiMagnesCence On: October 25, 2006 04:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh man, I hate that part where Seishun Gakuen lost to Hyotei and Rikkaidai. It just so unbelievable! They can't lost to those tennis teams. It's just so unlike of them. Seigaku can't lose to them! But i see that your story is logical for that since most of the Seigaku members are injured. Even though i understand that, i just hate you making them lost!!! But I don't hate you girl....
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Title: buahaha
Reviewed By: Eva the penguin On: August 29, 2006 02:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
heyhey~ glad to see you've updated to chapter20. and i love your fanfic.hehe. i wanna more Fuji~hehe.joking.
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Title: hoihoi
Reviewed By: Annonymous On: July 29, 2006 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very good idea here with Kikumaru Eiji going from one personality to another. You havn't really gotten all the characters down, but they are pretty good. Miru has quite a confusing persona, but she is quite well developed.
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