| "Seasons" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I read through the story and to be honest, advice isn't necessary. As far as I'm concerned, you've done everything right (apart from that 'mother' comment). Just keep bringing on the updates.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 21:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, I don't normally review until the end of the story, but I simply must address this: "So beautiful...just like Mom"? Mom! Freud would have a field day with this
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Reviewed By: lasing_na_pusa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 15:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome job on the story so far and i can't wait for the next chapter! So update soon!
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