"naruto revoliucija" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: um..well... Reviewed By: hanseki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 13:28 CDT Comment/Review: i also do not really like chap 4, but i also have a different version somewhere... oh and i din't posted chaps 2 and 3 coz i didn't find time to, but i will soon! that's a promisse! oh there also allready is chap 5 and 6! i just need to write em on pc(i hate doing that!)
| Reviewed By: Siekuto [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 18:40 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: I am disappointed. Your previous work was great, and yet this was...sad. Also, what happened to to chapters 2 and 3. Perhaps posted on another site? Regards, Siekuto.
| Reviewed By: Siekuto [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 18:32 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I feel that you don't give yourself enough credit. Your fic was excellent. You established your new character without revealing any details. Also, you managed to capture my interest in what I would consider a very short chapter. Few writers could manage such a thing. Very nice!! Regards, Siekuto.
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