| "your lost my win" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 02:47 CDT
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Just by reading the first chapter, you should get a spell checker. Check out one of my fanfics on how to do character "talking". lol Not a flame, you asked for someone to tell you what they think you should do. Thats my opinion. But seriously check out my story "HIS" its got a pretty good amount of views even though it doesn't have that many reviews. Nobody has really said anything about mine grammar/spelling wise so please check it out for reference.
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Reviewed By: demonic_jedi_master [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 20:50 CDT
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Uggg only you could make a love story. you hentai.:D still I wanna read the next . Keep going.
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Title: Michelle*
Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 17:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Update soon this story is great!!!!
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Reviewed By: ~Alanna On: July 19, 2006 14:12 CDT
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How can you just kill the jewel like that? Interesting, I think you should put a bit more detail into your chapters. Update soon.
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