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| "Star Crossed Rivals" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: ...
Reviewed By: Arenja [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2008 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got so used to fanfic.net that I forgot fics like these existed. (No wonder I abandoned this site...) The setting is cliche, writing is, all in all, horrible, and there is NO originality what-so-ever. I didn't like the story. At all. I suggest that you practice, a LOT. Read a few fics on fanfic.net (they have some really good shit), up your style, and then re-read this. You'll be surprised how bad it is. However, the flame stops here. You have some potential, and I used to write like this at one point. We all do. At the point you're at, good stuff seems bad and bad stuff is the shit. Not cool. Reading fanfictions like these that have little/no plot with a canon and almost non-existent vocabulary and a lack of understanding of the human mind basically mades my mouth run dry from the lack of enjoyment. Personally I like the pairing SakuIno, but this is possibly the worst fic that I've read with them in it, and I've read a lot. ... Okay, so the flame wasn't completely over. I disagree with DressLikeInuyasha on 1 point. Instead of a 6 on creativity I give a 1 since I have read about 20-30 stories exactly like this (but with better writing style, thank god.) I recomend getting experience. Write stories but don't publish them (If you did I would fear for my sanity). I don't mean this to be rude, and I apologize if I come off this way; it's just that you SERIOUSLY need to practice more often than you do.
| Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: dresslikeinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 00:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Personally, it's severely disappointing to read a FF that has so many grammar mistakes. It brings down the whole feel of the story. I recommend reading a good grammar book, revising your piece and finishing it. But hey, that's just me.
| Reviewed By: Tetsu Shatarii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you ever going to finish this? I realy want to find out what happenes.
| Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Danm thats hot Good job
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