Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Yami396 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 08:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's very difficult to find a well-written horror story without ridiculous monsters and like, especially one that revovles around Kingdom Hearts, so when I clicked the link for this story, I didn't set my standards too high. But you've completely blown those low standards away with this great story. Your opening drew me in, and it kept me interested long enough to make me read the next line, and that made me want to read the next line, so on and so forth. The idea for this fic was original; I've never read one quite like this, and it flowed with a pulsing beat that carried me to the end, and by that time, I was in a mix of awe, shock, and horror. Awe for your writing skills, and the rest for what was happening in this story. The only problem I had, and it's very minor, so you can ignore what I say, was when I saw Axel spelled out in multicolor, I had to laugh, and that kind of ruined the moment for a few seconds. But like I said, it's minor, and you probably had your own reasons for doing it, and I shouldn't preach about why you shouldn't. Anyway, this story was a great read, and I hope you write more because you have the talent for it. ~Yami-396~
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