| "Untamed" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Eme322 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2014 21:43 EDT
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I love the story so far, please update soon ^.^
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2009 03:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it :P but the once a year update thing is sad lol. :P but i love it none the less
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Konoha Ninja [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2009 11:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
I've not read a story like this one before. What a different concept! Please continue this.
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Reviewed By: lovesreina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 06:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
Good story, I hope you update it soon! However the formatting on the third chapter is messed up and it seemed like you left in some beta's notes, you should fix that so it's easier to read. Keep up the good work! :)
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: LupinGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 16:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot thickens! I'm impressed with the incorporation of the black star dragonballs of GT into the early DBZ timeline. Can't say I've ever seen that done before. It gives this AU a refreshingly different twist. Spelling and grammar is exceptional, though there is a recurrent type error that pops up: A capital "A" with some kind of pronunciation symbol over it.
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Title: Fairly good so far
Reviewed By: LupinGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 23:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm already intrigued by this story - how did Vegeta offend Frieza enough to merit banishment? Why can he not channel his ki? Will he ever get off that rock? I love survival stories, and DBZ fanfiction is no exception! I do hope you continue to update. Good work!
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Reviewed By: earlsblueeyedangel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 23:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your idea. Very Different, but good. Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 09:13 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good beginning, it gets straight into the story, please update soon..
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Reviewed By: Medeia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 15:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good start. I like your style too. Just please dont make Bulma a dirty mouthed, sex centric fishwife. Who wants a woman like that? This is an AU so you can shape her to be 'nicer' but not weak. And Vegeta... I like him dark, dangerous and sexy ^_^
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Lorien_cba [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 16:54 EDT
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Yo! I can't believe! It's a new story! =PPP Hey, how are ya, Silver? It's me, goddessathena! Do u remember me? =PPPP Well, it's a shame, I didn't read this new story yet, but I'll soon! =PPPP I'll left more reviews, this time about the fic! By the way, I hope you understood what I wrote, 'cause my english spelling/grammar really sucks! Cya!
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