| "The Tears that had Never Been Shed" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2008 21:58 CDT
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Huh... I honestly wasn't sure that I was going to like this story at first, but I think I may be warming up to it. I wanna see what happens next, so update soon, ok?
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Reviewed By: friggin dragon On: August 21, 2008 05:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hun your fic is very good but you have no structure to it. Its all meshed into one big paragraph with one line per sentance almost. Thats the only 'fault' I can see so far. But im really enjoying this so far!
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Reviewed By: jamc79 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2008 10:32 CDT
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I'm really enjoying this story. Your writing style has change a little from the beginning.....in that it has gotten better! lol I"m glad to see that the story is on-going and not abandoned. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Title: jamc79
Reviewed By: jamc79 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 12:51 CDT
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Yeah another chapter! Keep writing, I want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: XxthreecheersforsweetrevengexX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 12:00 CDT
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hey you do a great job on fanfics. I have tryed writing fanfics but i have a hard time developing a story line. thank you for the review it was very poetic.
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Reviewed By: Animestar73 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 12:51 CDT
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Oh!!!! Please Update!!!!!!!!!! Poor Heero!!!! Wahhhh Duo save him! Then ravish him! Muhahahah! Please update!!!!!!
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Title: 'The Tears that had Never Been Shed'
Reviewed By: Tina01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 13:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God! Poor Heero drugged, wounded, kidnapped, etc... You are doing a really good job with him... Duo and Heero have a strong link haven't they? Please don't forget to try update as soon as possible I like too much this fic. I want to know what the future reserves for that couple... And What about that maniac doctor J what he wants to do? Do you think in use the pink menace in this fic... Because among J ; Zechs; Oz; Relena is a bid menace for our love birds... Well Good Job Keep updating regularly for us Thank you for the nice Update Kisses and Hugs Tina
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Title: Various
Reviewed By: Wing Guardian [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 03:22 CST
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Hmm. The story is rather good so far. But I do have a request. One Dead Doctor, please and thanx.
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Reviewed By: C.C. Lynn On: January 27, 2007 00:21 CST
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SO good!! please update!!!
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Reviewed By: yetinmic [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 11:09 CST
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Interesting fic. I hope the others find Heero soon. Can't wait for your next update
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Reviewed By: Tina01 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2006 18:07 CST
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>BLUEplease, Please, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE keep writing this fic!!!!!!!!!! I am loving this! I'd like to read more and more!!! And the others They will help him... I love so much Heero So please update as soon as possible ... Kisses I just wanted to say
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Reviewed By: Ethereal Flower On: November 23, 2006 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, I am loving this! ^^ I only saw this today and I kinda want to read more ^^ Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kinra On: October 11, 2006 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, please write more and update soon. You have a great story going on and I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Niere [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 16:13 CDT
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Yes, I can assure you that this fic is read and enjoyed, and updates anxiously awaited! Heero has been "asleep" since yesterday after an OD? Hmm, coma? Will Duo be able to "talk" him back? Only the author knows, ne? And we the readers watch and wait... almost patiently. Love the story, keep it coming!
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Title: Go ahead please^_^
Reviewed By: Tina01 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 11:10 CDT
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Oh My God! O love this fic... Poor Heero. Will Duo reach Heero's heart in time? Doc J is a bastard isn't he? Please don't leve me a long time just waiting I'll be dying if it to take a long... Thank you Kisses and Hugs Tina
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