| "The Tears that had Never Been Shed" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
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Reviewed By: vampyr_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 02:17 CDT
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please, Please, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE keep writing this fic!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: "The Tears that had Never Been Shed
Reviewed By: Tina01 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hi! I'm loved what you wrote, and I'd like to read more and more!!! What happened with Heero, Will He okay ? And the others They will help him... I love so much Heero So please update as soon as possible ... Kisses I just wanted to say HI! .......................\.|./ ......................_\|/_ ......................'..'..'..'...................___ ................._.|..--.--...|.___.--'___`-. ................'.'.||....|....||`-----'"........`...` ...............'.'..||.()|()||. ...___..-'.'.../.............\ `----'"`...../.......-.......\ ................(.'....(___)...'.) .................`...__.-.__...' .....................|_|...|_| ....................`.`--.'.
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 05:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
No Ideas but you gotta continue. Gotta know what happens lol.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 12:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay for updating!
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Reviewed By: kitora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 21:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good keep it up.
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Reviewed By: lady malynn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 17:11 CDT
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I really like this fic. I do agree that it would be cool to read more of the pilots thoughts and emotions. Maybe expand a bit on how each reacts to what Heero is going through. I hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Keefy On: July 27, 2006 14:33 CDT
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I like the first chapter even if it's pretty short. The second one is ok, but it could be longer and why are there all the A's and @'s in it? I guess I'll wait for the next chapter and then decide if the story's still worth reading. Maybe if you could put a little more background information in the story like when the story is taking place (during the war or after?) and describe what the others are feeling when they found Heero lying unconcious on the floor etc. Well, hope you'll update soon. And please please make the next chapter longer than the last 2!!! ;-)
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Reviewed By: lady malynn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 23:03 CDT
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I love the way you started that! I can't wait to read more. I love Heero torture.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, you've got my attention. can't wait for the update.
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