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| "On the pain of death" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: MASHfan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally crazy, the topic shifts all over the place, but makes for an interesting storyline, and makes you practice your memory so you know who's who. Dunno what's in the package or who the angel is. I bet Machiavelli is really here to save Kai (whoever he is). Can't wait to read next installment. ^_^
| Reviewed By: SilverWhiteWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I only had enough time right now to read one chapter, but IT ROCKED OUT LOUD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Man, I freakin' wish I could write as well as you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *cries* Well, you can chack out my story if you want but yours puts it to shame!!!!!!!! I will most definately gonna read the rest when I have more time!!!!!!!!!!
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