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| "A Grand Affair" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 16:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh! Are you planning on continuing this fic? It seems so sad right now... But I'm sure you can make them happy again. :) Hehe.
| Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 02:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think this fic definately has potential. You've got a nice background setup. Heero's in the closet basically and acts as a couple with Relena so he can protect her better from some increasing danger I assume. I mean, the level of protection on Relena sounds like it's increased unless he's been doing this since he started working for her. Duo must feel bad, only being able to be with Heero at night and in secrecy. Having to watch him fake his life half the time. There's definately lots of potential for angst and drama, not to mention romance. Heero and Duo have the spark, it just needs to be expanded on. Anyways, I hope you continue writing this fiction so everyone can see what happens next!
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