| "Center of Gravity" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
Reviewed By: leta [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 22:20 CDT
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Loved the second just as much as the first! You're awesome!!
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 18:23 CDT
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I just love and respect your stories! You breathe new life into the Yuki/Shindo romance! I think you do Maki~sama proud!~ B reading U!
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Reviewed By: Morlana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 17:52 CDT
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Heh I reread the chapter for kicks and just realized you wrote it's the last one. I've been dying for a confrontation between shu and tohma. Oh well it was a great sequel. I think I'll reread the stories again.
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Reviewed By: Inari_kari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 18:39 CDT
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Whoo! THat was awesssooome :drools: yes!!! Thanks for not breaking them up and for letting Shuichi forgive him!!!! You are awesome-please keep it up and make MORE MORE MORE!!! Ooooh, I can't wait for the next chapter! Ahhh~ you've made me so happy. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ryua [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 21:07 CDT
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Shuichi smacking Yuki made me happy... and of course, so did the rest of the chapter... You know, for someone who makes his living in the academics, Yuki can be pretty dumb...
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Reviewed By: Ashcat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 20:20 CDT
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Noooooooooooooooooo! It can't end :( I had looked so forward to this story every week. I love your passionate writing and fun story :/ I really hate to see it end. Hopefully you'll think of more sequels or other new gravi works :) thanks so much for posting I think Shu might be a bit madder in the morning ;)
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Reviewed By: Inari_kari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 20:15 CDT
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Okay..I'm gonna cry. What was Eiri thinking? Oh, anyways, great great chapter, please post another one by tomorrow? It's labor day and I'm off of school!!! Please please? Pretty please? Anyways plaese email me is you get the next one up, though I will checking tomorrow (hehehe can't wait...). makuhari_sen@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Fuzzubunnytoo On: September 02, 2006 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was delisious and I am so happy to find another older fanfic writer and lover. This waas really good. Mine is not as good and I am very impressed. Have only read chapter 1 and am really wanting to read the rest as soon as possable. Color me very green with envy. Congratulations this was - HOT, HOT, HOT, YUMMY HOT!
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Reviewed By: gravilove19 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew it was going to happen eventually to but...Tohma you bastard >.< I was really happy when it shoed you had updated cause the 31st was my B-Day but thats not a happy ending. Oh well can't wait for your next update.
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Reviewed By: Ryua [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 07:15 CDT
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Aaah! I knew that had to happen... didn't want it to, but knew it had to...
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Reviewed By: Ashcat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 21:32 CDT
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I was so excited to get my mm email about this being updated, I was hoping you'd update today :) But *ARGH*... oh eiri :( drunkeness is no excuse, and knowing Eiri he'll do something stupid now :/ and poor Shu :( missing his lover so badly and yet this :( awww... I can't wait to see where it goes but argh... oh eiri :( what a regret!
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Reviewed By: mzblue On: August 31, 2006 21:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you Yuki, you dirty cheatin hoe!!!! god I love this fic, here I am yelling at the puter. I love the writing style you have. The story flows quickly, but without sacrificing the entertainment. Good Stuff and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: gravilove19 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for your next update. Good Luck!! Ja!!
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Reviewed By: Morlana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 09:45 CDT
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uh oh, Eiri is having doubts and I hope Shu can reliee some of them. You'd think he'd realize that he'll need quiet to write his stories and he can always visit shu, unless Tohma is really getting to him more than he's willing to let on.
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Reviewed By: Ryua [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 07:07 CDT
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Oooh, trouble in the relationship? Fun... you could just throw the pairings wide open and have a free-for-all orgy! That would solve the jealously issues, I think...
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Reviewed By: Ashcat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2006 22:15 CDT
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I was so excited to see you updating I missed it last week :D YAY oh and the plot thickens.. indeed does Eiri need Shuichi. I'd like to see more of Eiri's past, how much does shu know? Does shu ask? I can't wait to see where this goes and of course the smexing was scorching! thank you so much for posting!
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Reviewed By: ashcat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2006 23:02 CDT
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Wow I love chapter 3 - the phonesex was super hot and I liked how you are building up the characters slowly. I find it interesting that Eiri isn't coming out to support Shuichi but Shuichi has moved on and accepted how things are. :/ I hope Eiri shapes up a little on that and yum I can't wait to see their getting back together after a month to celebrate Shu's new contract and all... yum! I'm so glad you wrote a sequel!
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Reviewed By: Ryua Malfoy On: August 10, 2006 22:59 CDT
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Damn, that was fun to read! You're very, very good, you know. What a naughty lady you are...
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Reviewed By: Ashcat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 23:36 CDT
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I am loving this story! I like the AU and how it is going so far. I thought the sex was smoking :) wow great job and I loved how Shu and Eiri weren't too OOC in their behaviors :) damn I almost think Tohma is going to try to rape Eiri in place of Kitizaiwa! Sheesh! I can't wait to see where it goes.. I wonder if Shu knows about Eiri's writing...
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Reviewed By: Ryua Malfoy On: August 03, 2006 23:23 CDT
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Oooh, yay! I love your naughty scenes! Even though men make me laugh, I still love the way you write them.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 25, 2006 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS A GREAT STORY PLEASE UPDATE
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Title: More More ^.^
Reviewed By: gravilove19 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting for forever, lifke said before I to almost fell out of my chair when i saw you had posted. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ryua Malfoy On: July 21, 2006 06:59 CDT
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Ooooh, yay! I've been waiting for this one to come out! You really have an excellent way with the lovely dirty scenes...
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Reviewed By: Ashcat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2006 00:43 CDT
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I was so excited to see you had started your sequel! :D Horray! I had really enjoyed the first arc and now this is quite a promising beginning to the next arc as well! I really like how you play off their emotions for eachother but have set up the uncertainty that will lead to problems for them. Wow and great smut very steamy :D
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Title: YES!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Is O Eirinn On: July 21, 2006 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!!!!!! OMG you dont know how long i have been waiting for this sequal. I fell out of my chair when i saw that this was posted, Its awesome i loved the chapter please update sooooon!!!!!! : )
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