Title: good first story
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story for your first DBZ fanfiction. The plot makes sense, the characters are in character, and their dialogue are well handled. I look forward to seeing other fiction by you. Keep writing!
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