| "Chocolate Covered Fun" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: SerenaJr On: June 23, 2005 23:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I ove what u came up with. PLease continue.
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Reviewed By: QueerBoiAndy On: November 16, 2002 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I must say I'm inpressed. Usually the stories on this site aren't to impressive, and I normally read DBZ only, but this takes the cake. Or rather brownie should i say? Anyway, love the story and I'll be lookin' out for more stuff done by You. Good job, A for effert. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Eo On: June 22, 2002 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE..........Very good i love it and i want to read more so update do a epolige or whatever it is that u do next. I'll be checking up on this one. Eo |
Reviewed By: Rina On: August 30, 2001 20:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is soooo cute! I like the idea and it's sounds realistic. I luv the plot! =) |
