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| "Schoolhouse Rock" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: HoT!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2009 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow very hot! i loved it!!
| Reviewed By: anonymous random yaoi reveiwer On: July 27, 2006 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, I LOVE the title, it's such a great pun. One of those random things that made me laugh out loud. Yay for pervy puns! XD Anyways, this was quite good, I enjoyed the more realistic view of a first time blowjob. Most go on and on about how cum tastes surprisingly good, but I happen to know that it's really NOT good. Not absolutely disgusting, but not good either. Umm, anyways, I also liked your use of the word 'spooge'. I haven't heard that word in forever! So got another random snicker! Heheh, so your fic get's a 10/10, be happy!
| Reviewed By: Bloodied Wings On: July 23, 2006 03:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How exactly do you leave a smut-fic a good review without sounding like a pervert? I loved it, I've never actually seen a couple like Ichigo and Ishida so realistic. It was very true to their characters, even if it was just PWP yaoi. I think you've made me a shipper for the couple now! It was a fun little read and continue on with the fics.
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