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| "Equivalent Exchange" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] | Title: uhhhh
Reviewed By: dawnmm On: May 29, 2007 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can wait to see what you do with the other alphonse
| Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 23:14 CDT
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You are using cruel and usual punishment to get what you want (sorry for the strong words). I mean if you really want reviews the best way to get them is to update, then new people will see your wonderful story and will review =) (instead of those of us who would like to leave twenty reviews of our own just to get you to update) I mean, to borrow from Ed, "you can only get something by giving something" or something like that, so update =) (or I think next time I will leave like one word per review and you will have way more than ten WAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH evilly) And I would like to apologize now for my evil side coming out in the parenthesis (why am I evil?). Great work =)
| Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 16:58 CST
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Seriously? You're waiting for ten comments? That's really not fair, is it? DD: I only just now bothered to review because it's buried far underneath other stories, so no one else is seeing this. Will you update for five? *sigh* Sorry to push, it's just really good, and, well, I want to know what happens! The quality of writing is consistent with your other stories, that is, good.
| Reviewed By: ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates On: November 18, 2006 22:17 CST
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Aww, holding the next chapter hostage for reviews? *heaves big sigh* Okay, okay. Here is my review. I like the fic so far, it shows potential. I like how you had notes at the start telling readers the basic background details, as there are some that don't fit with what we now know of the movie. While Alphonse Elric and Alphonse Heiderich do spell their first names the same in the movie, I personally like it when authors spell the name of the second differently. I've seen one author use Alfonse, and another always used Al for Elric and the full name for Heiderich. I like your decision to leave the e of the end, I just think it helps to keep the characters separated. So far the only negative point is that there is no chapter two, as it is being held hostage. Do you have it written already, or do you start writing it after you get enough reviews? Either way I eagerly await your next chapter.
| Title: o ya
Reviewed By: fma lover On: July 25, 2006 22:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very excelent story, i already have booked marked the first chapter, plz plz update, i cant wait for the next chapters, and since it has to do with the movie that makes it better, good job man keep it up!!
| Reviewed By: SmartassChibi On: July 22, 2006 23:40 CDT
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that was amazing! absolutely amazing! the story line is great, and in my opinion, better than how the movie was layed out (ending kinda pissed me off -_-'') but please, update soon!!! ^-^
| Reviewed By: Flame Phoenix (NLI) On: July 21, 2006 23:41 CDT
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Very good basis, and as you haven't seen the movie, I'll pretend it's a diversion from the actual plot. :3 Few things though-- Alphonse Heidrich and Alphonse Elric's names are spelt the same. And yeah, Al is ten years old when he's returned to flesh. (See episode 51.) And actually, Roy and Riza aren't married. (Unless I completely missed something.) Anyhoo, great job, and be sure to keep working on your other FMA fics!
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