| "The Game" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Hollow_Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an amazing fanfic so could you make more chaps PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2006 12:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just finished reading Descendants of Darkness manga, so I have a little/tiny inkling of Susaku. The chapter was great, maybe just a tad confusing since I'm not familiar at all with Fuushi Yuugi (sorry if I spelled that wrong). But, still enjoyable. I think I caught the gist of it. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Werven On: July 27, 2006 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, an update. I have been following this fic for quite a while now, and I'm glad to see that your worlds are just as rich (albeit confusing at times) as in the previous chapters.
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 23:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HAH! I KNEW it! I was thinking...'there seems to be some hints being dropped and Trowa's kinda MIA, wonder if he got sucked into that game'...and low and behold if that isn't just what happened. That's great! Again I want to say how very much I'm enjoying the story. It's quite intriguing. And now I'm checking mm.org daily to see if there's been an update yet *laughs*. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh this is fantastic! Very enjoyable. I'm not familiar with many of the characters you are bringing in from other anime fandoms, but your descriptions of them and the realms is so well done that it isn't necessary to be familiar with the other fandoms. There was just a wee bit of confusion in this very last chapter, such as Heero being there with Wolfwood & Kurama in the beginning then all the sudden he's in the base on a terminal with no real mention of him sneaking away (almost like he dematerialized then materialized in the base lost). And that particular realm was bizarre in that it didn't seem to have any one fit like all the others did, but was rather a mesh of all of them (ex: all the other realms seem to be from specific fandoms like Trigun or YYH, whereas the last one seem to have elements of all of them if that makes any sense). I'm figuring that confusion will be cleared up when Quatre explains, which I'm definitely looking forward to. I'm also looking forward to visiting your site and indulging in your other GW fics, especially the 1x2 and the 1x5x2 that I noticed there. Your style of writing is very good with descriptions/details, painting the scene easily in my mind as I read along and making me want to read the story in one sitting. Hope there will be an update to this one very soon. Thank you for sharing.
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Reviewed By: Starfall [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 04:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
confusion settling in chapters 9, 10, and 11 are all the same and 12 takes up after whatever was supposed to happen in chapters 10 and 11, otherwise great story can't wait to finish it when you get the chapters corrected.
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