| "The Return" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: bobbie joe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work! This story has the potential to be a classic. The only problems I have with it are grammatical. Update soon please!!!!
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Reviewed By: DeadlSoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 19:56 CDT
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OMG sweet!!! I love you, do you know that? of course you do, you uploaded 2 chapters in ONE DAY!!!!!!! 8D *glomps* great chapters most definatly origional plot lines and events! hehe..... X_X the owl saw them naked and on top of one another...... I would go either into cardiac arrest, or a coma if that happened to me... good thing it was only Link and Malon! XD cant wait for the next update! see you then!
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Reviewed By: DeadlSoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 22:54 CDT
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damn im running out of compliments, besides the usual even if its true, I STILL LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! *glomp/attacks* please update soon it is lookin good. damn it I cant find anything wrong with this chapter so far! *complains and stomps off* curse you, lmao
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Reviewed By: DeadlSoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 22:54 CDT
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OMG!!!!! I love it! great job!!!! lemme guess... the green skinned gerudo is Gannons son right? jeez you think Shigeru Miyamoto would have thought to put him in an only guy palace or something, I mean who would want to do that with him... never mind dont answer that, Im sure there is some twisted person out there willing... but neways, I loveth it! update soon please!!! its a really great story and is getting QUITE interesting :>
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Reviewed By: inuyimmeh198 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 03:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the 6th chapter was good and the person that link growled at was either ganondorf or someone else through out the games that was evil.i cant wait to see the 7th chapter.
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Reviewed By: DeadlSoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell what in the world are you beatin yourself up over? this is the best story ever! I cant wait to see the next chapter, though if you wanted to be severely picky I could help you re-read it, but that's only if you like, I didn't find more than 'maybe' 2 or 3 things misplaced, but since they were only minor we knew what you were talking about and life went on :) other than that it was smooth a awesome! *jumps excitedly waiting for new chapter* and don't get down hearted at not getting millions of reviews for this superb story, its only because not many people read, let alone write, many stories about LZ:OoT and what not, so you can see why the activity is kind of low. You still have to make sure and update though, people do read them and I'm sure I'm not the only one anticipating another chapter for this story :> *huggles* you definitely did your homework before writing this, its not sloppy and you put more detail into it than most would, plus it gives us a good since that you know what the hell your talking about here, most people rush through and jumble it all together, I applaud your skills *bows* update soon and if you want any help be sure to let me know ;)
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Reviewed By: inuyimmeh198 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good story but why have zelda get married to a zora.sorta wierd you know.But hey that aint my problem.
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Reviewed By: Crimson Reaver On: September 28, 2006 09:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story. it's shows links more human side. Please try to finish it as soon as possible!
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Reviewed By: DrewB1442 On: September 23, 2006 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well Done. I hope to see more of this story in the future.
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Reviewed By: Korisovra [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far, it's an excellent storyline. The only mistakes are grammatical in nature. You slip in and out of past and present tenses at random times, it's the only thing that takes away from the enjoyment of the story.
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