| "Travel to Konaha" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: ludifg On: April 28, 2008 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the idea... but I think you have aq bit of work to do concerning your writing... I feel like you yourself don't know where tyhis story is going and I also think that having that many characters in one place is bound to get confusing. It made me frustrated... * pout* BUUUUUUT, over all, good story!!
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Title: Itachi of the Akatsuki
Reviewed By: itachioftheakatsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a messed up story, but it's very, very, very good. Update quickly, please.
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Reviewed By: kuro fenikkusu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 08:22 CST
Comment/Review:
not ment to be patronizing, but it's spelled Konoha not Konaha
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Reviewed By: silver_neptune On: October 01, 2006 21:02 CDT
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update soon. it's really good. if you need ideas here are some. naruto's gang can try to help harry defeat voldermort. and some how naruto gets capture because of Kyubi or something like that. but if you got your ideas then update soon! ^^
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: Isabell(to lazy to log in) On: September 13, 2006 18:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for updating. I hope you can update soon. I won't preassure you though.
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Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 17:23 CDT
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Update please. you got five reivews and you only have 3 chapters! not bad so update! i like the story too so update and i meant 6 reviews onculding mine.
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Title: update!!!!
Reviewed By: isabell On: August 22, 2006 18:53 CDT
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i like this story so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Black Rose317 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 12:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool i like it
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Reviewed By: Indreamlandforever On: August 11, 2006 19:29 CDT
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It 's great! keep up the good work. please load the next chapter soon as possible. Thanks. ^^
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Reviewed By: alwayshiei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 18:35 CDT
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I think it's pretty good so far. Please, keep writing more! It's pretty interesting.
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: spookagirl(to lazy to loggin) On: July 23, 2006 12:09 CDT
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i like it so far but you'll need to write more for me to determin if it is good or not.
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