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Reviewed By: Roxiepluto On: November 21, 2015 01:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fan fiction so much I read it twice in less than a
week - I read it the first time in a day and a day later couldn't
stop thinking about it so I had to read it again, this time
savouring it a bit more as I go. I don't understand how this fan
fiction has affected me so much but I want to say thank you so much
for writing it! I enjoyed every second of it :)
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Reviewed By: KuroKarasu0102 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2008 17:53 PST
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This is a lovely fic!! i love the imagery and the angst in tai and matts relationship, and who doesnt love an arrogant taichi! you are awesome update soon!
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Reviewed By: Masojai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 23:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wowwwww. I'm speechless! I've been checking the website almost daily since June [ Of this year, lol ] Just to see if this story gets updated. I'm not much of a writer myself, so I can't really say anything meaningful I don't think, but I do read an awful lot and I've enjoyed this just as much as any novel by big-shot authors. I can't wait for the rest of this story!
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Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 22:28 PDT
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I'm doing my best to type a coherent review through the haze of tears... I love how you tied everything back to that fateful 'accident' - showing it from Tai's perspective, how he couldn't stop himself... Your writing is such a unique blend of fiery prose and pink-tinged fluff... *gasps* This was SO worth the wait, thank you for updating!! Will we get a bit of closure with the fortune teller in the next chapter? I'd love to see her reaction to this new *ahem* development.
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Reviewed By: Aviendha On: October 08, 2008 06:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderfully well written, and the beauty is in the details. This is the kind of fanfic that is so hard to find; a story of real love and how it develops between friends. Not to mention the strife it can carry in its wake. Keep writing like this, and you will certainly be published one day. Please update as soon as you are able to, I look forward to reading the rest of this story.
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Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2008 17:51 PDT
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OMG! Where's my Fortuna update? (joking) Trying not to be impatient, but *screams* I need some closure/continuation SO badly!!! ^_^ *hugs* Please, please, please update!
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Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 18:28 PDT
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Congrats again - you've produced another wonderful tear-jerker chapter. I cannot wait to see what news about Matt's breakdown Tai receives when he comes back from camp... Mwhaha! You're too evil. :) One sick, twisted part of me would really love to know what exactly Matt said to Sora/TK/Kari...
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Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2008 12:11 PDT
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Okay, second review, I know, what a loser... :P Ha! Reading this through the 2nd time, I realized that perhaps Tai knew EXACTLY what he was doing. It was Matt that tensed up in shock at the end. Not Tai. Hmm... makes this addicted reader ponder, and ponder, and think, and obsess... ^_^ And pray you finish chp 14 SOON! No pressure.
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Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 21:35 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Egads! Write more! That's an order! (joking...) ^_^ I had a slight flicker of an idea of what was really going on, but, nah... I just shrugged it off. Then, WHAM! came the realization at the end. Beautiful. Great job adding Lily back in. Great detail - I agree, it's what sets an excellent story apart from the great ones. And THANK YOU for writing it just before the start of camp. :P What the HECK is this going to do to their relationship/friendship?!? Being away from each other for a week after such a wonderful/awkward moment. Ahhhh! (screams like the crazy fangirl I am) Cannot wait for chapter 13! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 21:05 PDT
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That was so sweet and yes, tied up some loose ends. I am SO in love with this fic! Please update soon - we're going crazy with anticipation! :)
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Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 20:48 PDT
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Oh! Okay, this isn't a review but rather an idea - Tai's going to soccer camp, right? I bet the time spent away from each other will lead to major angst, yes? :P Mwhahaha!
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Reviewed By: Event Horizon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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This is the biggest buildup ever!!!! (...I hope!) :) This is just me praying for a happy ending. Please write more - we're dying here! ^_~ 10s all around - great narration, great pace. The fun doesn't stop when you're peering into Yama's head.
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Reviewed By: Amanda da On: May 24, 2008 01:38 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I really like this its really good can't wait to read more :D
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Reviewed By: BelleoftheBall [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2007 09:12 PST
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I just want to say that is was SO GOOD that I think I vomited on the floor from the sappiness.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 20:55 PDT
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Neh, take all the time you need for updates, but just continue to keep em coming, a good getting together story is hard to find, and this is one example of it being well done. Neh, just update as soon as you can, and we'll read and review as often as possible. So please, keep updating, and at least I'll keep on reading. Later
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