Reviewed By:Whatsername [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2006 05:35 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: The thought behind this story is amazingly creative and wonderful. And I like the places and the names of this story, but I feel that you have some issues with spelling and describing things at times. But it's a Wonderful plot and if you'd check up your spelling and sometimes grammar you'd find that this is an astonishingly great story! Keep it up!! I'd be really glad if you would like to check out my fics too and give me an oppinion :) Greetings// Whatsername
