| "A New Obession" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 17:22 CDT
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aw... that was so sad... will the epilogue chapter ever be put up? :big puppy dog eyes and pout: i must know who the woman was!
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 17:16 CDT
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oh thank you kagome! i knew you couldn't change THAT much! coulda stuck around to give him that kiss though... ooo must read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 17:14 CDT
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aw, evil kagome and inu love. its so sweet. kinda messed up that he's come after them now that sada and bankotsu have a family and are redeeming themselves kinda... i hope he leaves the kids alone.
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 17:11 CDT
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oh boy, what will sada and bankotsu do when they find out?? and i got it. kagome's either from his own mind or a tortured spirit
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 17:07 CDT
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it may have been short but it didtn dissappoint. :-) i'm happy inu's getting his revenge even if it is turning him into a monster
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 17:05 CDT
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.......i did not see that coming. is kagome a zombie like think like kikyo was? or a ghost?... shes not like herself at all... then again being killed the way she was doesn't surprise me that she changed like that... or a figment of inu's tortured guilty mind?
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Reviewed By: rhc reader On: September 17, 2009 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so far MUCH better than the first! wow inu lived! and he's savage!
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Title: To SHORTY
Reviewed By: suki_moon_princess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 12:27 CDT
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Then how about me? Mind just emailing me so we can get more out of ya? Kitty gets a kick out of you and so do I. It'll keep the chat out of here. Neway, thanks for the reviews. xP Glad ya like it. And as for your question about Kagome being like Kikyo, I refrain from answering any questions. xP
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Reviewed By: aSHORTYwithaSHORTtemper On: October 11, 2006 10:52 CDT
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FELINE person, though it DOES NOT matter my GENDER, i will tell you. I'M MALE. as for FMA, yes it does. AND why you can not find me on mm, i CHOSE NOT to create an account. THIS WAY no one can delete me for "flaming" them. so YOU WILL not find my account, i remain UNSEEN. now please REFRAIN from turning a review board into a CHATROOM. i will not answer any more questions
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Reviewed By: aSHORTYwithaSHORTtemper On: October 11, 2006 10:48 CDT
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i like it ALOT. it was SHORT but thats OK. I enjoy this NEW KAGOME better. IS she like KIKYO now? update wenever you can.
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Title: to shorty
Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 18:11 CDT
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i luv this story jewel! but shorty, i new of u wen u were on ff.net but something is bothering me. are u a guy or a girl and does ur sn have nething to do with fma? also... y cant i find u on mm?
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Reviewed By: aSHORTYwithaSHORTtemper On: September 21, 2006 18:03 CDT
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GOOD it appears your story is up here. i like it, it is short but bloody. but i FEEL you could have described it more THAT WAY it woudl have been LONGER. o WELL update when you can.
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