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| "Ties to Humanity" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Wither [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story, update soon.
| Reviewed By: black18 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always wondered how Naruto would turn out without Iruka in his life. Great job Update soon
| Reviewed By: Raman man On: August 02, 2006 05:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story it I was sad when Iruka died. I never even thought about what naruto would be like without Iruka in his life. please update soon.
| Reviewed By: Crazy_Killa On: July 30, 2006 00:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmmm this is a strange one ill have to say that. i find it hard to portray naruto as not being brilliant and know a whole bunch of stuff at the same time but you seem to come by it naturally. ill give this one an 11 out of 10. he is smart but not over the top where as most point him in that direction. i have to say that i like your style of writing a lot. keep up the good work and ,you no the usual request, update as fast as you can. cya l8r
| Reviewed By: Croatoa On: July 24, 2006 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
sad, but true to the most depressing parts (most realistic parts) of the manga. I liked it, though I do wish that Iruka survived, (though it is necessary; only reason I;'d want Iruka to live is to see him develop his own strong techniques, and use them effectively agaisnst those that would harm his precious people [heh]) Anyway, not half bad, one r two minor issues, but a good story nevertheless. I'd like to see the story continue, with a more serious and ingenious naruto working with the usual team (and showing more growth from Sakura and Sasuke than in the anime or most of the fanfics along those lines out there) Anyway, keep up the good work!!
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