| "The Darkness Within" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: THE DARKNESS WITHIN
Reviewed By: HIME KAGOME 28 & KIKYOIS A BITCH 28 On: September 01, 2007 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CAN YOU PLEASE UP-DATE SOOON ? I REALLY LIKED IT !!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: dark eruption On: March 05, 2007 03:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definitly looks like it's gonna be a cool fic. The summary just sounds wicked, and it's got Sesshoumaru in it! The fic looks really good so far. Whenever you get the chance it'd be really cool to read more, I don't care what time it is. But yeah, it's really cool. It doesn't stray to far from the original character's ways, but enough to make it enjoyably believeable. Naraku with his dark, two faced plans, Kagome being meek and innocent, sorta. And Sesshoumaru just being him, save for some details but it's a welcomed. So, who knows what you've got going on but it's a really cool fic so far. THX
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Reviewed By: Jessica_Hemora [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome story! please please please udate soon! :hides gun behind back: or i might end up killing someone....
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
enjoying so far, please carry on.
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Reviewed By: sesskags_4ever(not logged in) On: July 28, 2006 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just love the story so far so can you please update very soon.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe at work On: July 25, 2006 14:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
looking for to more I have enjoyed all of them so far
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Title: For you
Reviewed By: Narakulover77 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are quickly becoming one of my favorite authors. As you see I have given you a perfect score. You were able to catch my attention well. Your detail in writing is perfection in it's own. I like how you were able to discribe the lily once it changed. I could see it in my mind. I also love the fact of how you brought Sesshoumaru in slowly, waiting till the end of the chapter. The flashbacks were well writen and you captured her pain well. Why she went to Naraku I can see but the only thing that confussed me was that you said she was injured in battle. I hope you put a battle sequence in here. I can't wait to read more to see where this is going. Again perfect score.
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