Title: Umm....
Reviewed By: Dreizhen Roschen On: July 30, 2006 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great storyline, good plot, very interesting sounding. One thing: punctuation!!! You need to put periods at the end of sentences because a lot of that was a run-on sentence. Also, just a suggestion, you need to put spaces between your character's lines. Like, Yugi says something, enter, one space between the line of whoever speaks next. It helps the reader to understand it better. But punctuation is key! Other than that, it was very good.
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