| "Blazing Fires of Hell" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Ghostreader_Meep On: July 23, 2007 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like your style of writing this story. I hope you can update this story soon. ~Meep
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Reviewed By: HELLO :) On: July 12, 2007 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story. please keep writing
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Reviewed By: little_koneko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story, but it seems rushed somehow. If you maybe put a break between the timelines it would make it a little easier to understand. I like where you're going with the story so far, but it use some more originality. It's too much like others that I've read, and trust me, I've ead a lot of Yu Yu fanfics. Hope you take my suggestions into consideration. ~Lisa~ =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Invader Mika On: July 27, 2006 12:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HIIIIIIIII BLAZE!!!!! thsi is really good hope the other chapter is up soon BI BI
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