| "Kyouki" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: desert siren
Reviewed By: desert siren [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read you fic. Very interesting. I really hope you come back to this one. It would be a shame if you don't complete it. I'll keep checkin to see if you have updated or not.
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Title: Good Start
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story and I hope you do continue it, please update a.s.a.p.
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Title: GDW!!!!
Reviewed By: GDaywalker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is definately an interesting fic. I decided to check it out when you mentioned it in one of your reviews. I like the logic and mystery of it, but it would be awsome if there was some kind of "Murder, Sher Wrote" type twists in it. I'm talking about twists that we don't already see coming. Personally, I solve mysteries and puzzles for fun. Some of which I'm actually paid for. A lot of the sturff you've added so far isn't really that hard to figure out...You could also update more often. That's what keeps the readers reading. If you wait for anywhere over a week to update, I've found that your readers will simply lose interest.
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Title: Aaaah, so now we some more...
Reviewed By: Inu-Grrrl On: July 28, 2006 04:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great chappie, girl. I see now, InuYasha is one of them. This reminds me a bit of that Tom hanks movie called "Splash" where he meets this mermaid as a kid when he almost drowns & ends up meeting her again as an adult -naked of course, lol. I don't remember all of the details, but she had an ear-splitting scream too. ^_^ Good job thus far & Kagome is adorable (and that's saying something because I'm not a Kagome fan. I just like her WAY more than Kikyou.
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Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: July 27, 2006 10:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok I understand a little bit more now.. Inuyasha's A Kyouki too...thats cool. PLZ UPDATE SOON-again
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Title: Day?
Reviewed By: Ookami Hime Suriya On: July 26, 2006 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What day is it? Why is it important? plz update and clear up da confusion!! Ookami Hime Suriya
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Title: VERY interesting start!
Reviewed By: Inu-Grrrl On: July 25, 2006 22:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
A bit confusing, but I already have a few ideas on where this might go. I know I'll love this one like I love all your others! "Fuckety Fuck Fuck Fuck" Eh? LOLOLOLOL!!! Do dat shyt, gurl!
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