| "A SIMPLE MISSION" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Pacifica2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 12:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahhh man this is good and then it stopped sad. good stories should be finished and this is one of the good stories luck and please finish soon!!!! XP
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Title: oooh fun
Reviewed By: DragonTamer94 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more i'd like to know what happens next please
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Reviewed By: kitten4164 On: February 03, 2007 04:25 CST
Comment/Review:
great story though i wouldnt mind if you finished it!!! please? hehe
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Title: ooohhh i love it
Reviewed By: foggymist7 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 18:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update SOON SOON SOON SOON!!! that was so good i would have never thought of making a marrage misson between sakura and kakashi. That was great!!!
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Considering that your last update was in July, I'm having doubts about you updating this story, but hopefully you will. And if you do, can you please not space it weird like in ch. 2? Please update!
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Reviewed By: Deathninja48 On: July 27, 2006 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is a great idea and I think you're having the characters stick to their personalities pretty well, but i think that if you worked out the grammar kinks (such as skipping some periodds and commas(no offense)) you would be able to read it more smoothly, thereby adding to the enjoyment factor of the fanfic in its entirety.
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