| "Enticement" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: kitty008 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2008 12:10 CDT
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Damn! That was hot! Keep the ideas flowing! Oh, yeah, and by the way, anata doesn't only mean 'you' in Japanese. it is also a term of endearment commonly used by women when addressing their husband. Koishii is a term of endearment commonly used by men to address their wives. So, you don't need to worry, your Japanese doesn't suck.
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Reviewed By: black_vixen69 On: October 03, 2006 22:33 CDT
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Great story. lol, only one thing Ineed to say is Anata means "you" lol, not honey. I took classes and went to japane last summer and speak fluently. ^^ just thouight I'd try to help. Really loveluy story thoug.
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Reviewed By: Lady Valkyrie On: September 18, 2006 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(Bows)Thank you very much for writing such a great fanfic. The lemoney scenes were very well written, some of the best I've come across. Don't be discouraged by the small number of reviews because this fic is in fact really awesome. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: LilBrokenDolly [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 23:59 CDT
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Awesome fic! So much citrusy goodness! Seriously, the writing was quite good, the seduction scenes were HOT and I really enjoyed all the chapters! Great work.
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Reviewed By: madosie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DANG! I loved all of this lemony goodness. It was even better than a regular one shot one chappie deal with the little drama you introduced in the third chappie. I think they're such a romantic couple. That last chapter was pretty damn spicy too. Great writing, it was classy lemon action and well written. Great work!
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing story! very few gramatical errors. very well written with a solid plot. well done!!
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