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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Easily the hottest thing I've read in a long time! Great job! Truly AWESOME!!!!!~B reading U!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh update soon ..
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Reviewed By: Polka Dot On: October 22, 2006 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't like this at first. I hate seeing Inuyasha become all girly, but Sesshomaru isn't such a prick in this either, so it's nice to see them get along (sort of).
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!!
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Title: SWEET
Reviewed By: tinkrbell3 On: October 15, 2006 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that's what I call a good follow up, and way interesting, mostly because it isn't what I was expecting. No, it's even better. Thanks
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow please update soon.
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Reviewed By: kitora [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow geting better and better.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 16:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just keeps getting better! It is so hot in a bittersweet sort of way! Poor InuYasha. I hope Sesshomaru is good to him!
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Title: a reply to "tinkrbell3"
Reviewed By: sadeness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 15:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thank you for reading my story. Bold I am really happy that you enjoy it. Font Color Just to let you know. I am writing chap 9 and my Beloved Beta is working/suffering on chap 8. There is another wonderful Beta Lady working on the previous chapters and soon I hope to update the previous ones and also add the chap 8. Font Color This story is completely in a dark environment. So do not wait too long happy moments, maybe, I can change it, I do not know, now... Writing is amazing, the chapter by chapter feedback of the readers is really fantastic and interesting. Font Color I love it. Font Color Well Thank you again "tinkrbell3", I hope you and the others continue reading, enjoying, reviewing and commenting it. Je ne. Sade Ness.
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Reviewed By: tinkrbell3 On: September 23, 2006 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwe. Your story is really amazing.( Sorry that's the best word I can come up with at 4:10 in the morning; although, just so you know, there's a better word for it and it's on the tip of my tongue. Gomen I just can't think of it/ get it out correctly,right now)Yeah, but it's freakin' good. It's kinda sad though (if I remembered how to cry or show sadness I would) but not in a bad way though, y'know. It's like a novel or something or a biography. Yeah that's it, a fanfiction biography, it comes with the ups and downs. Awwwe poor, friggin' Inu-Yasha. The darn hanyou just can't catch a long break huh? Well, I guess that was your point,huh? Y'know not to make it into a Geisha/Cinderella story, right? Am I right? But it's really good, otherwise I wouldn't be up at 4 in the morning trying to finish all the chapters. Or maybe I would, I'm not that stable, I think. Ahhhhhhh, gomen, gomen, gomen. I didn't mean to write a critics newspaper section. Gomen, again, looking forward to another amazing chapter. You're doing a freaking really coolsupersweet job. ( I added all those together to make up for the praising word that won't jump out of me and on to this review)
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Reviewed By: kitora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome you have some spelling mistakes but thats it. loved it. plz update
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Reviewed By: hopelesslyinlove On: August 08, 2006 18:38 CDT
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your story is awesome. minor problems, but if you didn't have them then you wouldn't be human,right. plz. update soon. love all that pain...poor inuyasha*o*
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