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| "The Dreamer" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] | Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 21:52 CDT
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yeah.... nice chappie!!!! and if you ever do write a sequal, i'll be one of the first to read it, if i'm not at school.... =p freshman year is very difficult...... and i can't believe that i'm the only one reviewing..... i mean, cmon, why don't people say "good job" or some other complement? don't you people realsie that they motivate us to write more? well... anyway, nice job on the whole story and i loved reading it from the first word to the last author's note... well..... it's on par with my other negima favorite.... i think i'll keep it anonymas (i suck at spelling) for now..... well, Sayonara!!!!! (for now, if you plan on writing a sequal)
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2006 06:28 CDT
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Wow.... thatt's deep... and sequel!!!!!!!! i g2g to school now, i'll review again later
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 22:13 CDT
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wow..... so Conner is finally gone..... wow.... what a sad chapter..... are you gonna write both endings or just one? personally, i'd rather you write bth, but again, that cjoice rests with you, the author/authoress..... *bowing* have a good day/night
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 05:04 CDT
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b-b-b-but you said 17-18 chappies..... NOOOOOO oh, well.... nice of you to give sayo-chan someone to talk to..... wow... he killed two? wow..... the price you pay for being able to call on the power of demons...... *sigh* oh, well... if the next IS the last one, i'll read it..... till the end..... and i suppose you're not gonna write a sequal, unless the potline is open to one.... and i don't have anything against OCs, i have quite a lot of em, actually....
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 15:20 CDT
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oh, i forgot to add conner!!! =p
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 15:19 CDT
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O.O you killed the paparazi!?!?!?!?!? HOW COULD YOU!?!?!?!?! well ,i know she was one of your fav chars too.... just don't kill off any "major" characters? like konoka, setsuna, ku-fei, kaede, or negi.... anyone else i don't care about.... add nodoka to the list..... of people NOT to doom.... i don't care about many other chars.... and nice chappie!!!! i'll keep r&ring
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2006 05:46 CDT
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wow..... IS negi dead?..... and it's a NOBRAINER that Eva "hates" Nagi.... plus to break the curse she has to drain his blood... so... the quickest way to do that would be to kill him.... but i'm suprised she didn't go for a wide area spell like the one she used on the giant in Kyoto... because of these reasons i'm not flaming..... and just how frikkin powerful is the copycat? and i don't mind if it is just 17-18 chappies long.... if you make a sequal that is.... (if possible)=p ..... on second thought, that spell she used on the giant would've frozen his blood... so it would be counter productive? anyway, sayonara till your next update!!!
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 21:40 CDT
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wow... i liekthe idea of alternate endings.... and i support the happy ending as weklll as the bad ending..... =p i'm pretty much neutral.... but the rambling on about asakura dieing and that stuff, was a really good string of ideas..... =p i still love reading the story, and will cntinue untill it's done...
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2006 08:41 CDT
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wow.... so far i'm the only reading the fic? wow..... anyway, i loved the chapter, even that whole Conner breaking Ku-Fei's heart thing..... opens up a whole lotta doors for another pactio later that night.... =p what? I like seeing people get pactio and chamo dancing with the little flags of his..... XD have you een that? my bad for calling the dead girl Kayako...... if sam ever found out, she'd kill me..... anyway, i'm prob gonna keep R&Ring this fic, cus it's good..... and without me, you'd brobably not have any readers.... =p oh, if i don't review your fic when you upload a new chappie, don't take it personally, chances are i'm bogged down with homework..... freshman in HS..... T_T
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 14:18 CDT
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hm.... YEAH! reveal Negi's magic.... maybe they walk in as he attacks Kayako?.... is it Kayako? .... i still say Ku-Fei and Kaede as his pactio partners.... if negi dies, who'll take over? Conner? isnt the series called NEGIma?..... well, you get it, and i understand if you don't take my suggestions....
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 20:24 CDT
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Hm.... maybe Ku-Fei and Kaede could be his partners.... and the badass magicial items bit was good... keep it up, and maybe during the night we see a pactio or two.... XD that would be awesome and funny, depending on who it was...
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 20:09 CDT
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I like how the story is comeing along.... and a pen..... well, they DO say the pen is mighter then the swrod, so... a literal translation of that saying? all in all, i still love reading this fic.... even with the close death of Connor.. i hope you will keep it up... and I am reviewing because i like readint this story..... not because of a long fufilled contract...
| Reviewed By: Sahj On: August 28, 2006 23:00 CDT
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Heyyyy I'm waiting on the rest of the story!!!! Its really nice, the little childish student-teacher crushes... awww and Ku.... wats her name :-) and Connor had made such a cute little couple.. ha h ah a... so sorry Connor had to die.... Oh my gosh stop leaving me in suspense!!!!! I need to kno wats gonna happpen next
| Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 15:39 CDT
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..... well, done..... you have written one of the few i actually think are "read worthy" in the Negima department..... and Connor..... seems like someone i know..... or someone in sam's Messiah...... heh, shameless promotion for a friend..... Pretty good story line, and nice pranks..... but yeah, the paintball guns were overkill...... And now, i have fulfilled my end of the contract stated in my bio..... and that is part legal.... to me in anycase....
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