Title: For You Reviewed By: Kakarottonoouji On: October 18, 2007 22:02 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I don't know why this doesn't have any reviews! It was perfect depiction of what could have happened between them. And you got Vegeta down to a science. I like how you portrayed thier feelings, as if it wasn't love but the readers knew that it was something emotional. Excellent job!