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Title: HAWT
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 12:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME lemon. It's so hard to find good ones these days. Miroku and Sango are my favorite canon couple, so I'm very happy that you wrote about them. The sex was so natural too, and very well described without purple prose or over the top dialog. It was excellent and original. Kudos! It was definitely hot!
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Reviewed By: nelson bannaba On: September 23, 2006 01:29 EDT
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All that talk of exploring Miroku's body under his robes - !!! - warm and fuzzy with a little dose of smut to make it sit just right. :)
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Reviewed By: chichiwvu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2006 23:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very wonderful story! I really felt like you knew and understood the characters, and the story was believeable (which is hard to do in a 1 shot hentai) It was very enjoyable to read:)
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 02:49 EDT
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I liked many things about this story. I liked that the words unspoken between InuYasha and Kagome had an almost physical manifestation at the beginning. It was a clever melding with the actual physical manifestation at the tree. The symbolism of the binding and the release (in more ways than one), on Go-shinboku was poignant. More than anything I liked Kikyo's voice. "You said you wanted to live with me, as ordinary humans; you said you loved me; but tell me, did you want it too? The kisses?" I heard her say that and it touched me. "The kisses?" *sigh* Kikyo is rarely given much of a voice. You did good.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 22:23 EDT
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Jeez! How many places is this posted on MediaMiner? Shallow as I am, I always miss symbolism but it was dead obvious once you pointed it out. I was a little uncomfortable with Inuyasha going from Kikyou's to Kagome's arms so quickly, even if they weren't but, as always, I enjoyed Inuyasha's point of view. The lemon was good, too.
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Title: gift of letting go
Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: August 27, 2006 18:21 EDT
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this was beautiful. while i admit i'm glad to see kikyou at rest (mainly for the sake of inuyahsa. i felt that by this point her role was over and she needed to move on. i didn't see her palce in the final battle)you allowed inuyahsa to have his goodbye his grief, but realize his truth as well, no matter how much he felt for kikyou, no matter how much they were going to share, he and kagome shared more by that point and he had to look at that too. he couldn't ignore the feelings of one over the other and that meant looking inside himself and coming to terms with the emotions of both women. now we can only hope our manga version will get it right.
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Reviewed By: BrownRecluse [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 17:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful! I think you've created a whole new genre with this: the "Feudal Gothic Romance!" Loved it!
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Reviewed By: nelson bannaba On: August 27, 2006 17:36 EDT
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I don't know why you'd think I wouldn't approve - this was lovely. You've been a busy writer lately! I loved the emotional aspect of the sex (oral). It definitely increased the intensity quite a bit. Remind me to send virtual flowers to you muses one day soon.
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: August 27, 2006 17:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing writing! ^^ i love your style, well done!
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Title: loved it!
Reviewed By: Wheezambu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 16:38 EDT
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What a sexy and touching story. Heee...nothing says comfort like mutual oral lovin'! Great job, Fano!
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Reviewed By: axel721 On: July 27, 2006 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! sequel! sequel! =D
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 18:31 EDT
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Liked that Sango didn't orgasm from intercourse. It all seemed very real, but in a hot way.
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Reviewed By: Nelson Bannaba On: July 27, 2006 15:04 EDT
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Wow, how do you do it? A god-given gift? Very sexy and Mir/San usually leaves me blah.
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Reviewed By: mirfan On: July 27, 2006 15:00 EDT
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You write Miroku so damn sexy!
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Reviewed By: J.MOCHI On: July 27, 2006 03:45 EDT
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*sigh* this was nice. There's not enough Mir/San fics out there.
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