| "InuErotica" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: iPoe On: October 28, 2007 13:17 EDT
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Loved the sunshower images. Ah, I'm enjoying a lot of reading this morning! You guys were busy last night while I was being a Band Mom! I grew up in the mountains and your imagery was excellent; you managed to evoke the sense of powerful serenity in both our favorite hanyou and the scenery. Well done.
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Title: Oooohhhhhhh
Reviewed By: AKA Pirate Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 19:02 EDT
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How *satisfying* was that! Thank you for a terrific story. Your writing is amazing. Can't wait to read more.
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Title: love it!
Reviewed By: _luv_naraku_ [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 17:13 EDT
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once again you deliever a fluffy-citrus quickie! hope theres another one!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 16:38 EDT
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Oh my, "they're like a crown on your hair" that's so sweet!!!! !^_^! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: TouchOfMyDreams On: July 04, 2007 19:43 EDT
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I'm sorry my review has to be anonymous, but I don't have an account on here. A friend referred me to your story, "Wish". Here is my honest critique. In the beginning, Sesshoumaru placed Rin under the care of humans. Personally, I don't believe he would do that. It seems too trusting of an act for him. However, that's merely a matter of opinion. In the beginning, Rin thought briefly of a girl, Sayuri. You touched on Rin's feelings for her and their friendship, however I think you could have elaborated a bit more. When Rin was waiting for Sesshoumaru and he appeared... there was little reaction. Perhaps I'm being nit-picky, but the story is too good to have such a description-less interruption. I enjoyed the thoughts they had for each other. I thought they were descriptive, and fulfilling. There are few specific areas I can point out might need work. However, something about the story bothered me. The characters were generically in character, but... to me, it seems like one could switch the names out for Inuyasha and Kagome, and there would be very few problems. Overall, it was an above average story. Don't feel put down; it's often difficult to find well written stories where the characters are in character. You have a unique writing style that flows very well, and pulls the reader in deeply. But perhaps your heart didn't fully go into this one. I'm glad my friend referred me to you, and this story. I hope to read more of your work. And once again, I'm sorry for this review to appear 'anonymous'. I'd love a reply from you though. Feel free to e-mail me at touchofmydreams@yahoo.com
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: terrayochi On: June 29, 2007 22:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's totaly awesome fanfic... haven't read as great as yours for a long long time... the story is wonderful, deep n full of emotions, exciting, n i luv how u could undertanding the character n share it with us... i really am an inuyasha fan, reading yours grew a little tear on me, seriously, the story is beautiful... to think that this inuyasha's journey story will come to an end, i'll prefer it will, end like yours... thanks to write a great fanfic... ^^ terra daichi_creance@yahoo.com.au
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Title: ax
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 04:35 EDT
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Cute^^ You write this couple well. I love that you can come up with something great in such a small amount of words. Well done.
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Reviewed By: XShootingStarX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 17:00 EDT
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I've only read the first chapter so far, but I like it =) Its refreshing to see a fic where the writer doesn't bash Kikyo and make her all bitchy, cause she's not. Just cold and distant...kinda ^^' anyway I'm off to read the rest.
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Title: Home
Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 15:44 EDT
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Fianlly got around to reading this and, I have to say, it's one of your best. I liked Sess getting all frustrated because they couldn't find the right position. I loved the transition from Sess wanting to keep Rin at arm's length to realizing she was 'home'.
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: dove787 On: April 09, 2007 22:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was such a nice continuation piece to wish. You don't know how much i enjoyed reading a "realisitc" lemon for them, lol. It was just nice to see them both so true to character (well as close as they can assuming they would pursue a relationship) but thats what fanfiction is all about! Anyway, i know everyone's saying it but I love love LOVED IT especially the ending when she could make him laugh. maybe you'll write another chapter about when he comes back? LOL, your making it addicting to find out whats going to keep happening with them. I promise not to bug you about it though, we'll just see if it happens :)
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Reviewed By: 45cats [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 17:41 EDT
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Awww, Fano. I just read Wish. This has the passion of Entangled without the power. It's more about the relinquishing of power than the transfer of it. I love it when you write this way. The imagery is outstanding and your words fall like carefully placed notes of music. I haven't done too much reading lately and may not get to Home very quickly but Wish urges me on.
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Reviewed By: Tara_019 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 11:10 EDT
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well that was good im personally not a kikyo fan myself but if u have such a respect for her i guess i can respect that keep writing u r a GREAT! writer
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Title: axel720
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 05:47 EDT
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These 'quickies' are so cute ^^ I'm waiting for more!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 04:56 EDT
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Lmao.... ;)
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Reviewed By: Ru On: March 25, 2007 01:37 EDT
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Hahaha! That last part is pretty funny in my opnion. This is my first review on this site. Hm. -srugs- I can't believe that it has a word limit. Wierd. Oh well. I'm normally on fanfiction so this site is pretty new to me. Good story. Confusing but still good.
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