| "Sesshoumaru's Secret Life" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: midnightwhispers On: January 25, 2008 20:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've a very easy style of writing blending just the right amount of angst and tenderness. The story really flows off the page. The interactions between Sesshomaru/Miroku and Sesshomaru/Inuyasha were very sweet at times and very credible. The love scene between Miroku and Sesshomaru was so lovely, so tender. The only thing that disappointed me was the rushed ending though you left few loose ends. I did like that little bit with Kanna at the end. It made me shudder. Coincidentally I'm in the process of trying to write my own female Sesshomaru/Miroku fic and this has been very inspirational. Hopefully that block will dissipate and I'll get on it soon. I look forward to reading your yaoi in the future if not here, on y! Gallery.
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Title: Sequel
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 18:19 CST
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Yo you should totally do a part two! It would be awesome. Well right after Supression I mean.
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Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2006 16:49 CDT
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Hey the ending was a little forced in my opinion. I mean every time Inuyasha tried to kill Naraku he came close but every time Naraku had a Plan B. I think that the ending was a little forced too.
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Title: Gotta agree
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 18:21 CDT
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I like this story. I still think that Sesshomaru is a girl I say noone and I mean noone is that femminine! But still Lamb has the right idea about your fanfic. The Miroku/Sesshomaru pairing is great and so is the fanfic. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Lamb [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 21:21 CDT
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what a wonderfully interesting and very convincingly written story! you took this wonderfully interesting idea, and molded it to fit perfectly and absolutley believable into the sesshomaru we all know and love (or love to hate/hate to love;)) in the actual Inu yasha series. wonderful. I haven't even finished all of the chapters that are up right yet, but had to write this review and tell you what I though so far, especially when I saw that you had only seven reviews. this story deserves many more, and so I had to do my part to help with that. :D
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Title: Sess's secret life
Reviewed By: Another Mom On: August 12, 2006 19:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Boy, what a cliffhanger! I really like the tack you have taken with this story. Something like this really could explain why Sess has such a 'stick up his ass'. Can't wait till your next chapter. Love how fast you are updating! Thanks much.
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Reviewed By: Tobers On: August 09, 2006 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did not realize how much I have been looking forward to each 'daily' update.....until you did not! I am really liking this story. The idea/basis is fantastic. Your description of emotions believable The only thing I find wrong - for lack of a better word - is that the chapters sometimes feel like an outline, like your jotting down detailed notes to be filled in later - Don't get me wrong I'm loving this story - it's just I feel you could put so much more into it. It has room to grow...and not many others that I have read do.
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Reviewed By: Tobers On: August 09, 2006 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did not realize how much I had been looking forward to each of your 'daily' updates.....until you did't! I am really liking this story. The idea/basis is fantastic. Your description of emotions believable The only thing I find wrong - for lack of a better word - is that the chapters sometimes feel like an outline, like your jotting down detailed notes to be filled in later - Don't get me wrong I'm loving this story - it's just I feel you could put so much more into it. It has room to grow...and not many others that I have read do.
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: August 03, 2006 04:39 CDT
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Ah that's so sweet, Sesshy stuttered too, most unlike her.
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Title: vampress
Reviewed By: vampress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2006 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story, very original. I have been laughing my butt off in some parts. the first part is poor Sessy's anguish. Hope for the sib's yet. very entertaining story & so glad you update frequently. I don't review much because MM can sometimes be a pain, telling me I'm not me. Anywho keep up the good work & keep those chappies coming ;) lol
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune (too lazy to sign into her account) On: July 31, 2006 10:38 CDT
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Kekeke Well I liked curse of the wolf and I like this, carry on please! I am becoming a Lyiint addict, I don't think it is good for my health!
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Reviewed By: kirara_purr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 11:03 CDT
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wow, u really like sesshy related stories, dont u. this is an interesting idea for a story, and would definetely explain why sesshy looks so feminine....
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