| "Everything Will be Alright" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2008 21:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
this sounds good, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: Kit48 On: May 09, 2007 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Soon, k? Its a good start and I wanna know what Sesshou promised Kagome - this is a Kur/kag right - I hope so!
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Title: beta
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 00:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
i am offering to beta... ginduf @ gmail . com i managed to read your a/n after i wrote my review. if you need a list of authors i beta for i will be happy to provide it upon request. ginny
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Title: good start
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was an intreiging beginning. you have raised quite a few questions... the final battle, just the two brothers and two miko? how did fluffy become an ally? where is the jewel- is it whole, in her possession, inside her, fused with her? when do yyh players show up? how will they meet? will reikai be involved, how and when? is there a threat or a bad guy? what was fluffy's promise? did kagome have any more training? is fluffy in the makai? there are quite a few more but that is all i could think of without reading it again. please continue? thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: GaaraSakuraLuvers4Evah [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 16:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhhh!!!!!! This is really good! I love it! Please post more soon!
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Title: Everything will be alright
Reviewed By: hybrid560 On: November 20, 2006 10:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was amazing. it caught my attention and i want to read more!!! so, who's the man in the doorway? will he mend kagome back together? pleas tell me! More, More, More!! i'm here 2! hybrid560@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLZ let it be YOUKO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good beginning! I can't wait to see what you have planned next. Please update soon!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Raizen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was awesome!
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Title: Everything Will Be Alright
Reviewed By: Jonessa Salas On: September 03, 2006 01:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool and a little sad story.please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow it was pretty short...but i love it so far!!!! your style of writing is awsome, easy to read & everything (as of so far) runs together smoothly. Please Update Soon!!!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: darkshadowfox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 10:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon i can't wait to read more!! Please!! It sounds really good so far! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Vandreador [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 20:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm begging u!!! update the next chapter...plez
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Reviewed By: Update!!!!!!! On: August 31, 2006 17:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE I'M BEGGING U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ;.;
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Reviewed By: pyroticanimefreak@yahoo.com On: August 03, 2006 03:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep it up pweease
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