| "To Regain What Was Lost" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] |
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Reviewed By: StormCORBETT On: October 24, 2006 23:50 CDT
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WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!
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Title: chapter 6 (and 5)
Reviewed By: H-Girl69 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 12:02 CDT
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i can't believe I forgot to review the last chapter, sorry. I am continuing to enjoy this story, you have a fresh take on an often badly written couple. Keep up the good work! I look forward to reading more of your stories.
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Reviewed By: STORMYOUKAI On: October 11, 2006 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write more!!!!!!email me @lenorauntst@hotmail.com when you do
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Title: Chpt. 6
Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2006 21:18 CDT
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When are Sasuke and Naruto getting back together? I feel really sad for Sasuke (tear). Love Story up till now. Keep it up!
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 22:22 CDT
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This Chapter was really good. I t gave more info on the point of view of Sasuke and of his feelings as well. It's good you explained the past and how it all started, you answered some of my questions. I hope the next Chapter is about what Naruto has been doing and what he is deciding to do. Love the Chapter and hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: wendalethelurker On: August 23, 2006 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay I know your shocked cause I've came out of the closet not only on AFF but now on MM as well. I admit I just couldn't stand it any longer. Not seeing your work get any reviews here on this site was driving me insane. Since I read reviews when looking for a story I thought what the hell I'll come out for you littleolmee. Really the lack of reviews on your work from this site should be criminal. I know on the other sites we both tromp through this story has reviews out the ass. Don't know what's wrong with these people, but maybe this will help. Onward with the review. This story is very entertaining. I really like how the characters are presented. The storyline is original in that your idea of using memory loss as a main componet of the story adds in a problem for the characters to deal with and work around while Naruto looks for 'the truth of what happened and what's really between him and Sasuke.' You know your stuff when it comes to the Naruto fandom and it shows in this story. Over all this story has a great flow to it and leaves the reader wanting more. You have a top notch beta, the Jaded Lady deserves a pat on the back for her hard work as well. Great grammar, spelling, sentence structure, etc . . . . On the 1st chapter my favorite part is how you set things into the future and make it believable, if I wasn't up on the story I'd be thinking that is what really happens. Loved Naruto & Sai's interaction right on target. 2nd ch Sasuke's work and what he does to Naruto to make sure he stays with him well written and then of course that flashback lime scene between Sasuke & Naruto was, well . . . oh hell I'm secure enough in my masculinity, I'll say it. It was hot. ch 3 Sasuke & Naruto's discussion along with Sasuke's reaction to the news of Konoha ninjas meeting up with Naruto was well done. And basically the whole chapter left me on the edge of my seat wondering what would happen next. Ch 4, well that Sakura/Naruto scene was so heart felt and deeply moving. Then you throw in that hitai-ate scene after I barely made it through the Sakura/Naruto talk . . . I was teary eyed I admit it. But you come back and save my day with the Kakashi & Iruka lemon and added comedy that had me laughing right out of my seat. I was left hanging on wondering what is this woman going to post in her next chapter? I really love this story and I hope other people will give it a look and be kind enough to leave a review, especially something more then just update soon. I know from here your happy just to get a hello. You really deserve for folks to give this work of yours a look see though. Keep up the great work and I look forward to your next installment! Wendale The Lurker
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Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 20:27 CDT
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i absolutly loooooooooove this story. pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease write more soon.
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Title: hee!
Reviewed By: blk_roze [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is good im even printing these out to show my friends! ~blk_roze~ PS: please keep writing more like these!!!
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Reviewed By: kai28 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2006 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha that is downright amusing XD very very amusing im borrowing my friends account update soon ill go check oh his email though one thing i do hope your continuing this story.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 21:22 CDT
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This Chapter is so funny I couldn't stop laughing when Naruto found Kakashi and Iruka. I really want ot know who the next person to take care of Naruto is and if its Neji what is his 'inner pervert going to do'
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: H-Girl69 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 20:21 CDT
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chapter 4 had me laughing so hard!! Neji is just too much, i love him. Great chapter and great story!
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Reviewed By: H-Girl69 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 13:45 CDT
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i'm really enjoying this story. I hope you continue to update it here. This site is notorious for having low reviews.
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Reviewed By: Kikilo_Lea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 09:25 CDT
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Very nice. Keep on updating.
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Reviewed By: kyocat16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 04:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think this fanfic is really cute
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Reviewed By: Starfall [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 08:48 CDT
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never been to big on reviews but I definitly want to see more of this. The writing flows smoothly and is attention getting and easy to read.
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