| "The Collar" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2008 16:30 CDT
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i really like it so far. update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kimu On: March 18, 2008 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. I rated this highly because I'm a bit sadistic, and we need more stuff like this up here. I enjoyed reading this, and hope that you choose to update sometime soon.
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 19:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The roof? Some random clearing? Some place at least slightly comfortable? Yuki's secret base? Okay, maybe not that last one. Under a bridge? I know, it's probably none of those XD But please update again soon! This really surprised me! And confused me! Cuz one minute, Kyo and Akito are being masochists in an empty room, and the next, Kyo and Shigure and dry humping each other! So confuzzled X_X But I think Shigure and Kyo are the actual couple, and maybe Shigure is just letting Kyo have fun with Akito..? Cuz Shigure didn't seem too pissed about Kyo being with Akito, except for the collar thing. Please update soon! I WANT TO READ MORE!!
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Reviewed By: blakHARU2 On: August 30, 2007 19:51 CDT
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ugh! damn you! there better be a second chappy soon... or else... I might die! seriously... that was quite unexpected. Shigure x Kyo... haven't seen one of those lately. good job, btw... keep up to good work. ^_^
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Reviewed By: minnikat6 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you did a great job on this fic could you also tell me how to go to the next chapters
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Reviewed By: AkaiHikari On: April 30, 2007 05:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This was great! I love it when Akito gets all twisted-evil on people. You've captured all the characters perfectly. As for Shigure, I'm thinking in an alleyway on the way home.
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Title: nice review/ideas
Reviewed By: blk_roze [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your writting!!! please respond to next sentence! do you have ideas of where? or do you need? IF NEED: locked closet shed..) under bed in locked room(LOL) locked room onegai hurry with next chapter!!! ONEGAI=PLEASE
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Reviewed By: rurounix On: August 09, 2006 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I really love this! I love the atmosphere you've got going, and Kyo's relationship with Akito and Shigure! ^_^ I enjoyed the thing about the collar (kitty kyo) and Shigure's a naughty one ay? Gotta love that Kyo loving! Your writing style is great (thought I ought to add something more than mindless praise - which everyone's gota love anyway), liking the balance between description, action and dialogue (and thoughts). I also like the Sohma family dynamics you've written, from what I can see so far. Can't wait to see what Shigure has in mind!
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Reviewed By: mikko On: July 29, 2006 14:57 CDT
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on the roof? hehe, like this XD
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