"Commander Gendo's Happy Fun Time Hour" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Darknemo2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 05:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: Not your best work...Though compared with other stories it still shines... But once we cpare it with your other two... Well it isnt as great as those... You still did a pretty good job, its just that your previuos writtings, make us expect more from you... It isntt a flame by all means, I still consider it to be a good write yet if I were to decide which story of your should be dropped (though I dont wish for such thing to happen) I would go for this one... It has good moments but nothing outsdnading... Keep on writting, though, and show us how your skills can improve in the future...
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Title: MOAR! Reviewed By: AnimeFanJ666 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2006 06:55 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I must have more! I love this man! You definetly are gonna have to write more of this; I mean it is LOL in teh gr8st sense. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Innortal [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 21:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I do so love it, but I must ask when you will add more to it.
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