| "Project Inuyasha" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a nice story)) I think though that you should hmmm well go into more detail.. More descriptions.. 'Cause one minute Inuyasha is barely awake the second his already catching the mugger.. And this woman why was she crying? I mean, I get why, but It's not like she loved him or anything. She may feel sorry for him, but as much as to cry? She barely knows him.. Please don't be ofended! I enjoy the story. I think the plot is very interesting, and if you do it right this story may turn out as a very good one! I'm really waiting for your update))
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 00:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting...
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 07:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it I think I was good I hope you up date soon on it.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
It's nice so fare and I enjoy it. So I hope you update soon and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: theatrechick0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 01:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmmm when I read the review I thought of Ceres: celestial legend. It sounds like it could be good but be careful not to make the stories so alike that they end up being basically the same. can't wait to read more.
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