| "Project Inuyasha" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: EliFanel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 21:05 CST
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WoW... I like your story very much since the beginning... but I thought that you would never update... T_T .. Thank you for the new chapter!! ^.^ You will continue, RIGHT?!?! o_O PD:Oh! and get well.... ^.^
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Reviewed By: Tissana On: November 12, 2006 06:22 CST
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Your fic has a interesting story... Hope you'll update it soon!! I'm liking it very much!!
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Reviewed By: ashfire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 19:54 CDT
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that was good write more plz
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Title: Has me quite interested
Reviewed By: Midoriko-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 10:37 CDT
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You have some very interesting context happening here, like Inuyasha's 'awakening' and instant uptake of a role within the new environment that almost seem to come of instinct. However, you need to meat it up a little bit more, dear. For example; between Inuyasha's awakening and him meeting Kagome, you could have had the Red Headed woman describe how he was found (while she was talking to a new co-worker at the lab, for example. That would be a good way to take the readers through it) and what caused him to sleep and awaken like that, as well as given a little background check on Kagome herself and possibly given the girl something unique to her and this story, like a job which might have led her to be out late at night. What you could have also done was spend some more time with Inuyasha at the centre, so that the readers could have seen him progressing through his speech and his adjustment to his new envornment and role. It could all be done in one chapter if its hurried up and talked about in third person. ^v~ I'll be looking out for this because its got good premises, but try to meat it up some more! It'll be more fun to write like that too.
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Title: ^.- good story
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2006 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to make your chapters longer. But other than that its really good!! ^^ update!
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Reviewed By: bk On: August 03, 2006 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Please continue writing. I will be watching for an update.
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Reviewed By: elifanel On: August 01, 2006 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, I like very much your plot. updat sooooon pleasssseee =^.^=
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Reviewed By: inudewaruika* On: July 31, 2006 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more i say more!!!!okay, please. see i said please!
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Reviewed By: sexy_capricorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 07:22 CDT
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Mm. I like your story. It was a good read. It's funny how it kind of reminds me of mine *plug* Kyouki *plug*. Anyways, great fic and I wish you luck and prosperity on it. Sexy_C!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 03:52 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Getting better and hope you update soon. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 03:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a nice story)) I think though that you should hmmm well go into more detail.. More descriptions.. 'Cause one minute Inuyasha is barely awake the second his already catching the mugger.. And this woman why was she crying? I mean, I get why, but It's not like she loved him or anything. She may feel sorry for him, but as much as to cry? She barely knows him.. Please don't be ofended! I enjoy the story. I think the plot is very interesting, and if you do it right this story may turn out as a very good one! I'm really waiting for your update))
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Reviewed By: CrimsonInHumanBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 00:23 CDT
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Interesting...
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Reviewed By: jtcl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 07:12 CDT
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I like it I think I was good I hope you up date soon on it.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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It's nice so fare and I enjoy it. So I hope you update soon and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: theatrechick0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 01:41 CDT
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hmmm when I read the review I thought of Ceres: celestial legend. It sounds like it could be good but be careful not to make the stories so alike that they end up being basically the same. can't wait to read more.
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