| "Dark Love" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: raven2010 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2010 14:36 CDT
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I love this story it's awesome. thanks for writing it
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Reviewed By: tims_girl_ashley [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2010 09:14 CDT
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you should so continue this story i love it
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Reviewed By: kittenclaws [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2010 09:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the dark series and this story is wicked awesome and I believe you are doing a wonderful job to bring this story to us for our enjoyment so keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: vampirebride kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 16:55 CDT
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ok its been two years since you last updated. so can you please update i dying to know what happens. So PLEASE pretty PLEASE update SOON!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: vampirebride kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 22:40 CDT
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oh and P.S write more please with a cherry on top
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Reviewed By: vampirebride kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 22:37 CDT
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ok why didnt i think of that series. the big ups of that series is that kikyo cant get between them. i have not gotten far but i like it and tiny qustion is there going to be a seqal about sess. and his lifemate?
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 21:14 CDT
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Love, love the story. Please, please update soon.
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Title: Chapters 1-5
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2006 01:01 CST
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First off, Happy 20th birthday! Say goodbye to the teens cause they're gone forever! hehe Don't feel bad since I'm right there with ya, lol. On to the comments about your story, what can I say other than that it is wonderful? Your plot is very original and I have never read the "Dark" series so perhaps this is why. I like how you've taken the Inuyasha characters and have fit them so well into this AU. The only things that made it a little odd to read your story was the formatting, spelling, and grammar. Other than that it was perfect! If you need help with the spelling, formatting, and grammar, I would be more than happy to help out and be your beta. ^^ Please continue writing and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: AvengingAngel12 On: November 25, 2006 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I absolutly love your story! But there are a few things that are bugging me...well one imparticular. Could you maybe shorten up the paragraphs? Having them so long makes it difficult to read. I mean, not liek shorten up the whole chapter, but just make it where the paragraphs are shorter and theres more of them...ok sorry if I'm sounding like a complete idiot here but yeah lol. But anyway, keep up the good work! I love this story! I have read almost all of the Dark series and I love them all...especially the possessiveness of the guys. For some reason I just love possessive guys. Ok I'll shutup now and elt you stop reading my boring review. Anyway keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: bluegurl On: November 25, 2006 23:30 CST
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i like your fix on the story. i too have read the Dark series. but could you possibly fix the formatting? it's difficult to understand dialogue when they are so close together in block paragraphs. just a suggestion! Happy Writing!
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Reviewed By: jezi_futhak On: November 23, 2006 16:47 CST
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wow you are getting old... not. i totalluy understand update soon
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Title: Dark love
Reviewed By: Selina On: October 18, 2006 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG please please update really sonn, i have to star reading the stories or the series, it seems so good but i know i will, really love your version way better ooohh please please update really soon. love selina
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2006 11:51 CDT
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Inuyasha you sly sly dog... Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Laurachan On: October 17, 2006 09:58 CDT
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Wow, very nice beginning; I always loved this kind of story...so please, just keep it up ;)
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 08:38 CDT
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I like this story update soon!
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