| "Sour Candy" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: phoenix_of_hell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 11:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Also very good, and a nice idea, with the apple-flavored candy. And I particularly liked the part with Light saying he doesn't like apples, and Ryuzaki answering with "Not anymore".
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Reviewed By: Erotic mushrooms On: July 07, 2007 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE I HATE YOUUUUUU!!! You make me so sad!!!That was beautiful but heart-wreanching. And besides, sour apple is my favorite flavour....
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Reviewed By: Rinji Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, just read your DN fanfic. it's really well written and definitely an interesting little one-shot :) very much enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: taintedesire On: October 18, 2006 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
moo.. i just went down the list reading.. and it was a good kind of surprise how there were so many excellent DN fics one after another.. then i realised you wrote all of them! lol. kudos to u for making my day! (but the angst really got to me..*sniffle*)
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